Practical Simulation Sheet Publipreneur Based Language Learning (PBLL-Editing)

 

Practical Simulation Sheet

 Publipreneur Based Language Learning

(PBLL-Editing)

 

 

The Learning Portfolios must be collected as follows:

1.     The Original Group Work of PPT (Power Point)

2.     Approval used of Editorial Symbols in Pair’s Group

3.     Neatly typed of revised edition

4.     Printed Edition of Class Work Dummy

5.     Individual Voice of Recording in youtube channel for possibility of getting A Grade

 

LEARNING TREATMENT
No	PBLL-Approach	Meeting	Portfolios	Learning Output	Learning Outcome
01	Prewriting	1-8 (UTS)	PPT Group, Mid-Test	Intend to be Self-Publishers (www.zalzulifa.com)	English for Special Purposes
02	Drafting
03	Revising
04	Editing
05	Publishing	9-16 (UAS	Book Dummy (PPT Group, Final-Test) Individual Voice in Video	Digital Publishing Member of www.polakata.com by registering to www.polakata.com/addacc.pkt
06	Marketing
07	Delivering

 

 

EDITOIRAL SKILL IN ENGLISH

PUBLIPRENEUR-BASED LANGUAGE LEARNING

(PBLL-Editing)

IUNSTRUCTIONS
1.          Use the red ink pen to mark your editorial findings 2.          Write the name of manuscript’s writer within the box 3.          Write your name as an editor within the editor’s box 4.          Write the title of manuscript 5.          Treat the draft as an accepted manuscript to the Editorial Department. 6.          Edit the manuscript by using the editorial signs 7.          Put  the number of your editorial findings (mechanical, substantive, pictorial)  within the box right-side 8.          Write your verbal verification either suggestion, comment, or input  for the manuscript’s improvement. 9.          Give your editorial judgment  about manuscript from the perspective of prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, publishing, marketing, delivering) 10.       Good Luck.. be your best.
Students’ Identity		Writer			Editor
Name		Kansa Putri Salsabila			Savira Putri Adellia
Study Program		Photography			Photography
Title of Manuscript		Taking Great Photos Means Nothing If You’re Missing This
C=Competence :  NC= Non Competence
No	Editorial Findings		Number	Key Word		C	NC
A	Mechanical Editing
	·              Types			She was freaking out. Hence the five phone back-to-back calls on a Friday night.   . Hence This expression is usually followed by a comma when it is used at the beginning of a sentence.
	·              Words			freakout
	·              Phrase			-
	·              Clause			-
	·              Punctuations			-
	·              Comma			-
	·              Colon			-
	·        Semi Colon			-
	·        Preposition			-
	·        Dictions			-
B	Substantive Editing
	·         Content Accuracy
	·         Language Consistency			United States
	·         Message Originality			The article from the internet.
	·         Reader’s Interest
	·         Coherence
C	Pictorial Editing
	·         Harmony
	·         Balancing
	·         White Space
	·         Color
Verbal Verification:   Very good article, sentences and paragraphs don't have many mistakes.
Editorial Judgment   The article is great, becaue it has a good meaning to the readers.